You want your student application to stand out.
Your essay can make the difference.
followed your passions, filling your schedule with arts, athletics, service, and more, making you the kind of well-rounded,
interesting student every school wants. But when you try to convey who you are in
650 words–or even less–you’re stumped.
Your college essay should be the showpiece of your
application. How will you start?
Parents–feeling stuck?
It’s only natural to want to do everything you can to help your hard-working high-schooler with college admissions. But how can you help without driving either of you crazy? Do you think your child needs help getting organized? Are you worried they don’t have enough colleges on their list yet? Wondering how to even start helping them with those intimidating essays?
I can help! Join my Subscriber Hub, where I offer free resources for both students and parents. Check out my easy-to-copy organizing systems for everyday To-Dos and applications (and casually share them with your teen). Read the guide I wrote just for you and learn how to really make a difference when it comes to those college essay—without nagging or editing them yourself.
You need more than a teacher, more than an editor.
I know how to help students improve and correct their writing without losing their own unique voices. I have the education and experience to not only coach students through one crucial essay, but to teach them the techniques of good writers and editors–growing their skills for college and beyond.
Frequently Asked Questions
Why might I need a college essay coach?
Writing a college application essay requires a set of skills that are not always taught in school, and certainly are not practiced regularly. It asks students to recognize their own growth through experience; choose a story that best reflects on who they are; identify details that best tell the story and those that should be left out; find an organization for the essay that conveys the story clearly while keeping readers’ attention; edit for structure, clarity and correctness; and know what to cut in order to write a piece that uses every available word but not one over. A coach can help students improve their skill in any and all of these areas of writing, turning them into an overall stronger writer as well as producing an essay for applications that’s more likely to shine.
When do I need a college essay coach?
The best time to start coaching is at the very beginning. For one thing, it will save you the frustration of trying to find a topic and draft a piece without any guidance. For another, you don’t want to invest time into an essay if you’re at all unsure about the topic. When you have a piece you’ve put a lot of time into, you might be reluctant to hear that it needs major changes. I have had many students insist they just needed a final read-through and help with “copy editing.” They were never correct. While most didn’t need an entirely new topic, they did need a lot of restructuring and adding of information and details. It’s really frustrating to feel like you’ve already done significant work on a piece and have to go back almost to what feels like the beginning. If you work with a coach from the start, you’ll save that wasted effort.
That said, it’s never too late to start if you’re unhappy with your essay, especially if you feel like you’re willing to make a lot of changes but don’t know what they should be.
Are college essay coaches worth it?
A college application essay is a potentially powerful tool–but it’s not a tool that lasts. If the essay does its work well, the writer will be continuing on to an excellent institution that will require top-notch writing not just for one essay–but all of the time!
An essay coach, on the other hand, is an investment in a writer’s growth and skills. When students work with me, they are learning to beat writer’s block, organize their ideas, and edit their work in ways they rarely learn in school, even in top-rated public schools and high-quality private schools. In addition to my work with college applications, I have worked as a writing coach with college students, students applying to graduate school, students pursuing Master’s and doctorates, and young people beginning careers in law and business. If a student is not adequately trained in these writing skills, they will likely end up paying for this type of tutoring at some point along the way. Investing in these skills the first time the stakes are high–for undergraduate applications–is a smart choice that will continue to pay dividends through college and beyond.
How do I find the right college essay coach?
There are many college essay coaches out there, and a Google search might leave you feeling overwhelmed. When you’re evaluating your choices, keep in mind what you should be looking for:
- You want someone with experience as a writer–they will know what the process should be.
- You want someone with experience as a teacher–they will know how to break down the process and explain it to you.
- You want someone with experience as an editor–they will understand how to improve and clarify your writing without changing the style and voice.
- You want someone who is energetic and positive about the process, to help cheer you on when you’re feeling frustrated.
- And you want someone who seems open and trustworthy, for your important and sometimes very personal stories.
Where are you located? Can you provide online coaching?
I live in the greater Boston area, but coaching takes place exclusively online, allowing me to work with students all over the country (and even the world!). Online work is really effective for editing together, as students and I can be looking at the same document at the same time, seeing and discussing changes in real time.
What free resources do you offer?
If you’re looking for help with getting organized in your college search or application process, check out these blog posts:
- A Go-Anywhere Bulletin Board for Your College Application Planning
- The Tortoise and the Hare and the College Application
- Twenty Questions (And Then Some) With Your Dream School List
- College Admission Guide 2022
Then head to my Subscriber Hub for copies of my exact organizational tools.
If you’re looking for help getting started, check out these blog posts:
Help! I don't know where to begin!
Start with this blog post: How Do I Start My College Essays?
Do you edit student essays?
Because I am committed to teaching students to be stronger writers and self-editors, I exclusively edit with students, not for students. I teach students how to vary their sentence structure, cut extra words, improve their grammar, avoid unnecessary transition words, use punctuation more effectively … and more. And I do it in the context of improving the piece the student is actively working on–the college essay. But I do not edit outside of sessions and send students feedback, as I don’t believe that’s the best way for the student to grow as a writer.
Can you offer a free consultation?
If you’re wondering whether I can help you, let’s have a free 15-minute consultation. If you already have a draft, I can look it over during the consultation and suggest potential areas of improvement (such as, “I believe the structure of this essay could be improved,” or “I think you need a more recent story”). We’ll talk about starting or improving your essay, talk through your strategy for completing one or more application essays, and I’ll explain the ways we could work together to make your essay and your writing experience better. Please note I cannot give you specific feedback on your essay in that time.
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